CNF

This is the prompt I wrote in class.  Critiques appreciated!

A kiss, hurried in the front seat.  A kiss, moist and dry--dragging with one lip, skating with the other.  A kiss with one eye open to peek and shiver.  A kiss for the other drivers anxious for green.  A kiss, colon-asterisk.  A kiss with tongue coating lips--electrifying yet wonderfully gross.  A kiss, gradually falling into breathing and smacking.  A kiss missed when saying good-bye.  A kiss forgotten because there is so much.  A kiss to forget there is so much.  A kiss that blooms from pecking seeds into moist blossoms into nibbling petals.  A kiss so hard teeth clang.  A kiss of remembrance--A kiss to never forget that this electricity, this skating and gliding, this man is peeking, too.