Here are the haiku I wrote in class from last night's found poetry exercise.
A stone falls--A heart
Alone with two children close
incessant water beats
Ancient kisses and
the same road will sustain me
Sincerely, the earth
And there is a series of haiku that I wrote about waiting--mostly about waiting for the T (buses or trains)
Absentmindedly,
Minutes are lost to waiting.
Wonder where it all goes.
People on the T
are bronze-armored barbarians
Vying for a seat.
I play Tetris with
Thoughtless thumbs--filling in gaps
with L-shaped pieces.
I often forget
that the world whispers to me--
Earphones block it all.
Words burn into my eyes--
my hand stiffens with cold.
Never felt so good.
would love to hear what you all think!
Really nice--you've done a great job of capturing the purity and essence of each moment!
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